I just started this one over my lunch break. I've no Idea where it's heading, but I'm deathly afraid that it may be a long one. Anyway, any critiques, suggestions, or constructive critisism, please feel free to post it. I look forward to the assistance. Well, I hope you enjoy, and I'll post updates.
Jaymz
No title yet, a work in progress
1)
"This human must be what?!" Y'narl asked incredulously.
"Protected at all costs", Farseer Ma'Talya said, "No harm must come to her, for she holds the salvation of Ulthwe on her very hands."
Y'narl's eyes were wide in disbelief. A Mon-Keigh, a degenerate savage human. This mewling slobbering human child-thing held their salvation? This was too much for his mind to grasp. "Surely this must be a mistake."
"Do you doubt the sight of Eldrad Uthran?" The farseer asked, glaring, "for it is his sight that has brought us this portent, 'If this human falls, so too shall the children of Isha on Ulthwe fall.'".
Y'narl took an involuntary step backwards. "Nnn-no", he stammered, "I would never question His sight!"
The Farseer's face softened, "My son, I understand that this is difficult to reconcile, especially for one so young, but for almost two thousand years Eldrad has guided us along the most dangerous of paths, and ever have we skirted the black maw of destruction. It is by his sight alone that Craftworld Ulthwe survives."
"Yes father Y'narl said quietly, "I do have much to learn."
The farseer smiled again, this time with pride. "Understanding your ignorance is the first step towards wisdom."
With that, the farseer layer his hands upon his son's shoulders and smiled at him.
"Now my son, you must undertake this task with the utmost urgency, and above all else, this human child must be kept safe."
Seeing the obvious look of dismay on his son's face, Farseer Ma'talya laughed. "Come now", he laughed, "It is not for so long, what is a hundred years? Merely the blink of an eye for one as young as you."
2)
Kayla McCraig inhaled, exhaled, inhaled again and held her breath. The crosshairs of her scope hovered over the primary heart of the Gorthak Hound. Her vision narrowed, her focus razor sharp. She became one with the rifle, and slowly she squeezed the trigger. The sound of he shot rang out in the forest, sending birds and animals fleeing. The beast roared with rage and pain. Turning to face her, the beast howled again, and began its charge. She knew this was the critical moment. The Gorthak Hound had two hearts, one in the back section of its torso, the other one encased in a bone casing. Since the only opening in the bone case was oriented towards the Hound's head, the only way to kill it and retain the trophy head was to shoot it's first heart, and wait for it's charge.
It was because of it's resilience and power that the Gorthak Hound was the symbol of Gorthak Prime's noble ruling family, of which Kayla was a princess of. Gorthak was what is commonly called a "Death World" in the Imperium of Man. As it had been for centuries, all the children of the noble ruling house has to stalk and kill the Gorthak Hound, and bring the head back as a gift to the people, a symbol of their determination, martial skill, courage and their devotion to the people. Only one who has done this is legally allowed to rule.
Again forcing herself to relax, she drew a bead on the creature's chest and fired. The beast continued to race towards her. She had missed! She raced to reload, the enraged monster bearing down on her when suddenly, the beast collapsed. Cautiously, Kayla walked towards the Hound, ready to open fire should it begin to rise, and head be damned. The beast made no movement, and didn't respond when she cautiously stabbed it in the flank. It was dead. Kayla knelt to look closely at the chest. There were the two holes, although the second one, the most important one was a bit off center.
"Must have only nicked the heart, took time to bleed out."
With that, she swung her blade, and gathered her right to rule.
Y'narl lowered his long rifle and activated his holo cloak. He waited for ten minutes, then rose to follow his "charge.". Kayla had grown up believing she had a guardian angel. In all honesty, Y'narl was no angel, and Kayla would probable flee from him and call the guards should she ever find out about him. He was her guardian though, and for the last 25 years he has protected her from the shadows. He had saved her from kidnappings, assassinations, accidents and injuries, and like today, animal attacks from a number of vicious beasts that resided on his death world. All his done from the shadows. Nobody on the entire planet knew of his existence, he had made sure of it. Several servants did disappear in the night, presumed elopements, and there was a noble or two. The only one Y'narl felt anything close to remorse for was the Razor Cat Kayla had as a pet when she was younger. She had loved the cat, but the animal would stare at the invisible Y'narl and hiss and spit. So one day the cat just up and disappeared. Her parents had explained that the cat was probably a victim of one of the many predatory birds that made their home in the crags of the palace. Kayla had long understood the cycle of predator and prey on Gorhak Prime. One did not live long I they didn't understand, and more importantly respect the many extremely dangerous creatures found out in the jungles beyond the city walls. Still Kayla had wept, when she thought no one was around.
Of course Y'narl was there, and he did feel remorse, for the cat, not the child. The animal was not an enemy, and Y'narl owed it no malice. Just the cat he told himself, not the Mon-kei.
The honest truth was that over the last quarter century, he had grown to feel somehow for this human child. It could not be called love, or even mild fondness, perhaps a small bit of respect? The child was unique amongst the barbaric and chaotic humans. In truth she was almost Eldar in her levels of concentration and determination. Y'narl had watched her spend days in the combat dojo, practicing a single strike to perfection. Never leaving, repeating the same strike over and over again, striving for perfection, not unlike an Eldar.
Y'narl shook his head, what was he thinking? This was a human, one of the chaotic, ignorant, irresponsible humans that had brought so much trouble to his people. Did he not leave on the path of the Outcast because of the humans? He had been away from his people for too long.
3)
He had been a very promising artist, a sculptor when his father had come to him and bid him to follow. "Where to father?" Ma'Tayla did not answer. Into the dome of the seers they walked, then into a crypt, then down stairs behind a false wall. He and his father walked into the darkness that must have been a secret unlit room. Frightened he asked,
"Father, what is going on, father I cannot see!"
"Look upon me and see young one, see that which sees eternity."
Y'narl spun towards the voice and found himself facing Eldrad Uthran, the legendary seer of Ulthwe. "My Lord..." he stammered, almost afraid to speak.
"Do not fear child, for your fate is not violence in this place. This is the hallowed hall of the Seer Kings." With a mental command, globes of light came into being, bathing the two Eldar in their soft light. "It is here that secrets are told, and secrets are held. Things which must be said, but must never be said. This is the hall of such things. Now stand child."
Y'narl rose from his knees. He looked around, eyes wide. Decorating the wall were statues of the Eldar gods, of heroes and the Phoenix Lords. There was a small table and two chairs in the middle of the room. On the southern wall there stood a huge door, seeming made of Iron, not wraithbone. It was pitted with age and rust. Powerful runes ran along the archway and in the center of the door, a single rune. Y'narl had not traveled along the warrior path yet. He had been a mime for a time, in a harlequin troupe, but he had been unable to truly travel the path of the harlequin, so he had returned home to be a sculptoer. If he had been a warrior, he would have recognized that rune immediately. "My lord, that door, where does it lead?" he asked, although deep within his consciousness, something sparked, something red with fury, something violent...
"My child, only the Young King can truly know." Eldrad said cryptically. "Please child, we must speak. The Craftworld must make a very costly request of you."
"Child, I have traveled the skeins of time, I have seen..." Eldrads voice had trailed off, and Y'narl waited patiently.
Slowly turning to face Y'narl once more, Eldrad spoke. "The infinite futures, the many universes. There is a reason child, why only the greatest of us dare penetrate the veil of the future. A lesser mind would be lost..." Again he trailed off. Y'narl did not understand, but he was young, and he knew that he had much to learn.
"Yes my lord, only those of the path of the Seer should dare cast the runes of fate." Was this to be a lesson; was he to be a seer?
His ancient eyes fixed on Y'narl and Eldrad rested his hands on Y'narl's shoulders. As Y'narl looked into the ancient seer's eyes he could see the consciousness behind them focus, almost gazing into his very soul, and he almost broke eye contact. Through he wanted to turn away, he remained looking into the old seer's eyes. At once the seer broke eye contact and sank back into his chair.
"Yes, the possibilities are there, the outcome, perhaps, many variables, yet very possible..." The seer spoke without looking at Y'narl, seemingly to himself. Then looking at Y'narl he motioned to the chair and bade him to sit. "Please Y'narl, son of Ma'Tayla, second seer of the council, sit with me, we must speak."
This was how it had begun, his journey along the path of the outcast. Eldrad had spoke to him of the humans and of their Inquisition. Humans, it was always the damned humans. These intergalactic infants had just enough knowledge to be dangerous, and not enough knowledge to be wise. Eldrad had spoke of two Inquisitors, each arrogant, each believing them to be right, the other to be wrong. Eldrad had traveled the paths that led to the futures. Should one Inquisitor be victorious over the other, then the great grandchild of this Inquisitor would become a member of the Ordo Hereticus. This grandchild would investigate a report of a cursed artifact on a planet yet to be colonized. This "cursed artifact" was in reality and ancient data crystal containing information about certain Chaos Daemon Princes, including names and binding runes.
"I have seen the future of this path, in her arrogance; this human will attempt to summon one of the handmaidens of the Great Devorer, and in failing to contain this beast will unleash a torrent of daemons against our craftworld. Child, this must not happen! The other Inquisitor, he must prevail in the conflict, and you must assist him, it is the only way, all other paths lead to damnation."
Y'narl had accepted and in the guise of a harlequin, he brokered a deal with the Inquisitor allowing him extremely restricted access to a document within the Black Library which detailed the ancestry of his opponent, and how an ancient ancestor had been convicted a heretic. This was all it took, but with this information the Eldar sanctioned Inquisitor was able to best his opponent, and this outcome led to safety for Ulthwe. As part of the deal Y'narl had been given certain training by a special instructor from the Inquisition temples, who rarely spoke and never spoke his name. When he had returned to the craftworld, he was a master of stealth and ranged killing.
This was the first of a great many of missions, each undertaken in the utmost secrecy, each given by Eldrad Uthran himself. He became a shadow instrument of the Seer Councel, a killing here, an explosion there, each mission critical to the survival of the Craftworld. And so he found himself here, the invisible "babysitter" for some Mon-Keigh girl child.
